Bug 179328 - Mozilla-specific wording in duplicates.cgi explanation text. Patch by gerv; r,a=justdave.

1 files changed, 13 insertions, 16 deletions

diff --git a/template/en/default/reports/duplicates.html.tmpl b/template/en/default/reports/duplicates.html.tmpl
index c9f469e2d..ce4d07001 100644
--- a/template/en/default/reports/duplicates.html.tmpl
+++ b/template/en/default/reports/duplicates.html.tmpl
@@ -135,39 +135,36 @@
 
 <blockquote>
   The Most Frequent Bugs page lists the known open bugs which 
-  are reported most frequently in recent builds of Mozilla. It is 
+  are reported most frequently. It is 
   automatically generated from the Bugzilla database every 24 hours, by 
   counting the number of direct and indirect duplicates of bugs.
   This information is provided in order to assist in minimizing
-  the amount of duplicate bugs entered into Bugzilla which in turn cuts down
-  on development time.
+  the amount of duplicate bugs entered into Bugzilla, which saves time
+  for Quality Assurance engineers who have to triage the bugs.
 </blockquote>
 
 <b>How do I use this list?</b>
 
 <ul>
   <li>Review the most frequent bugs list.</li>
-  <li>If problem is listed:</li>
+  <li>If your problem is listed:</li>
 
   <ul>
-    <li>Click on Bug # link to confirm that you have found the same bug and 
-      comment if you have additional information. Or move on with your testing
-      of the product.
+    <li>Click on the bug number to confirm that you have found the same bug, 
+        and comment if you have additional information or move on with your 
+        testing of the product.
     </li>
   </ul>
 
-  <li>If problem not listed:</li>
+  <li>If your problem not listed:</li>
 
   <ul>
-    <li>Go to the <a href="query.cgi">Bugzilla Search</a>
-      page to try and locate a similar bug that has already been written.</li>
+    <li><a href="query.cgi">Try and locate a similar bug</a> 
+        that has already been filed.</li>
     <li>If you find your bug in Bugzilla, feel free to comment with any new or
-      additional data you may have.</li>
-    <li>If you cannot find your problem already documented in Bugzilla, go to
-      the
-      <a href="http://www.mozilla.org/quality/help/bug-form.html">Bugzilla
-        Helper</a>
-      and post a new bug.</li>
+        additional data you may have.</li>
+    <li>If you cannot find your problem already documented in Bugzilla, 
+        <a href="enter_bug.cgi">file a new bug</a>.</li>
   </ul>
 </ul>