From 025a06c429aa15672534ef3a1c7cb51dec89c29c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: "timeless%mozdev.org" <>
Date: Tue, 24 Jul 2007 04:04:53 +0000
Subject: Bug 383595 "allows to" isn't correct r=mkanat a=mkanat

---
 Bugzilla/DB/Mysql.pm        | 8 ++++----
 docs/xml/administration.xml | 2 +-
 2 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Bugzilla/DB/Mysql.pm b/Bugzilla/DB/Mysql.pm
index 582df3d54..25ee32b64 100644
--- a/Bugzilla/DB/Mysql.pm
+++ b/Bugzilla/DB/Mysql.pm
@@ -190,10 +190,10 @@ sub sql_position {
 sub sql_group_by {
     my ($self, $needed_columns, $optional_columns) = @_;
 
-    # MySQL allows to specify all columns as ANSI SQL requires, but also
-    # allow you to specify just minimal subset to get unique result.
-    # According to MySQL documentation, the less columns you specify
-    # the faster the query runs.
+    # MySQL allows you to specify the minimal subset of columns to get
+    # a unique result. While it does allow specifying all columns as
+    # ANSI SQL requires, according to MySQL documentation, the fewer
+    # columns you specify, the faster the query runs.
     return "GROUP BY $needed_columns";
 }
 
diff --git a/docs/xml/administration.xml b/docs/xml/administration.xml
index fbaeb3c33..1fe8b9d72 100644
--- a/docs/xml/administration.xml
+++ b/docs/xml/administration.xml
@@ -202,7 +202,7 @@
         </term>
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            This allows to define specific users that will
+            This allows you to define specific users who will
             receive notification each time a new bug in entered, or when
             an existing bug changes, according to the normal groupset
             permissions. It may be useful for sending notifications to a
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