From 8d506420e0fb9985bf58ea4676f3376320558fab Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Mark Côté <mcote@alumni.uwaterloo.ca>
Date: Tue, 13 Jan 2015 09:38:31 -0500
Subject: Bug 1078099 - Clarify notes on account-creation page. r=dylan

---
 .../BMO/template/en/default/account/create.html.tmpl      | 15 ++++++++++-----
 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

(limited to 'extensions/BMO/template/en/default/account')

diff --git a/extensions/BMO/template/en/default/account/create.html.tmpl b/extensions/BMO/template/en/default/account/create.html.tmpl
index 38acb6320..8e8cfb2ec 100644
--- a/extensions/BMO/template/en/default/account/create.html.tmpl
+++ b/extensions/BMO/template/en/default/account/create.html.tmpl
@@ -116,13 +116,18 @@ function onSubmit() {
   <ol>
   <li>
     Please consider reading our
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+    <a href="https://developer.mozilla.org/en/Bug_writing_guidelines" target="_blank">[% terms.bug %]-writing guidelines</a>.
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