Update links to tldp.org and Bugzilla version numbers. Also, added some text ab

out this being a development version of the guide and instructions on what to ch
ange for a release (including how to disable the devel text).

1 files changed, 47 insertions, 83 deletions

diff --git a/docs/en/xml/about.xml b/docs/en/xml/about.xml
index 62e486573..219d529e1 100644
--- a/docs/en/xml/about.xml
+++ b/docs/en/xml/about.xml
@@ -4,40 +4,6 @@
 <chapter id="about">
 <title>About This Guide</title>
 
-  <section id="aboutthisguide">
-    <title>Purpose and Scope of this Guide</title>
-    <para>
-      Bugzilla is simply the best piece of bug-tracking software the
-      world has ever seen.  This document is intended to be the
-      comprehensive guide to  the installation, administration,
-      maintenance, and use of the Bugzilla bug-tracking system.
-    </para>
-    <para>
-      This release of the Bugzilla Guide is the
-      <emphasis>&bzg-ver;</emphasis> release. It is so named that it
-      may match the current version of Bugzilla. The numbering
-      tradition stems from that used for many free software projects,
-      in which <emphasis>even-numbered</emphasis> point releases (1.2,
-      1.14, etc.) are considered "stable releases", intended for
-      public consumption; on the other  hand,
-      <emphasis>odd-numbered</emphasis> point releases (1.3, 2.09,
-      etc.) are considered unstable <emphasis>development</emphasis>
-      releases intended for advanced users, systems administrators,
-      developers, and those who enjoy a lot of pain. 
-    </para>
-    <para>
-      Newer revisions of the Bugzilla Guide follow the numbering
-      conventions of the main-tree Bugzilla releases, available at
-      <ulink url="&bz;">&bz;</ulink>.  Intermediate releases will have
-      a minor revision number following a period.  The current version
-      of Bugzilla, as of this writing (&bzg-date;) is &bz-ver;; if
-      something were seriously wrong with that edition of the Guide,
-      subsequent releases would receive an additional dotted-decimal
-      digit to indicate the update (&bzg-ver;.1, &bzg-ver;.2, etc.).
-      Got it?  Good.
-    </para>
-  </section>
-
   <section id="copyright">
     <title>Copyright Information</title>
     <blockquote>
@@ -48,8 +14,7 @@
 	License, Version 1.1 or any later version published  by the
 	Free Software Foundation; with no Invariant Sections, no
 	Front-Cover Texts, and  with no Back-Cover Texts.  A copy of
-	the license is included in the section entitled  "GNU Free
-	Documentation License".
+	the license is included below.
       </para>
     </blockquote>
     <para>
@@ -57,6 +22,11 @@
       copyright, or publishing this document in non-electronic form,
       please contact &bzg-auth;. 
     </para>
+
+
+    <!-- The GNU Free Documentation License -->
+    &gfdl;
+
   </section>
 
   <section id="disclaimer">
@@ -64,12 +34,11 @@
     <para>
       No liability for the contents of this document can be accepted.
       Use the concepts, examples, and other content at your own risk.
-      As this is a new edition of this document, there may be errors
-      and inaccuracies that may damage your system.  Use of this
-      document may cause your girlfriend to leave you, your cats to
-      pee on your furniture and clothing, your computer to cease
-      functioning, your boss to fire you, and global thermonuclear
-      war.  Proceed with caution.
+      This document may contain errors
+      and inaccuracies that may damage your system, cause your partner 
+      to leave you, your boss to fire you, your cats to
+      pee on your furniture and clothing, and global thermonuclear
+      war. Proceed with caution.
     </para>
     <para>
       All copyrights are held by their respective owners, unless
@@ -100,7 +69,7 @@
       team members, Netscape Communications, America Online Inc., and
       any affiliated developers or sponsors assume no liability for
       your use of this product.  You have the source code to this
-      product, and are responsible for auditing it yourself to insure
+      product, and are responsible for auditing it yourself to ensure
       your security needs are met.
     </para>
   </section>
@@ -110,33 +79,39 @@
   <section id="newversions">
     <title>New Versions</title>
     <para>
-      This is the &bzg-ver; version of The Bugzilla Guide.  If you are
+      This is the &bz-ver; version of The Bugzilla Guide. It is so named 
+      to match the current version of Bugzilla. 
+      <![%bz-devel;[
+        This version of the guide, like its associated Bugzilla version is a
+        development version. Information is subject to change between now and
+        when &bz-nextver; is released.
+      ]]>
+      If you are
       reading this from any source other than those below, please
       check one of these mirrors to make sure you are reading an
       up-to-date version of the Guide.
     </para>
     <para>
-      This document can be found in the following places:
+      The newest version of this guide can always be found at <ulink
+      url="http://www.bugzilla.org">bugzilla.org</ulink>; including
+      documentation for past releases and the current development version.
     </para>
     <para>
-      <itemizedlist>
-	<listitem>
-	  <para>
-	    <ulink url="http://www.bugzilla.org/">bugzilla.org</ulink>
-	  </para>
-	</listitem>
-	<listitem>
-	  <para>
-	    <ulink url="http://www.linuxdoc.org/">The Linux
-	      Documentation Project</ulink>
-	  </para>
-	</listitem>
-      </itemizedlist>
+      The documentation for the most recent stable release of Bugzilla can also
+      be found at
+      <ulink url="http://www.tldp.org">The Linux Documentation Project</ulink>.
     </para>
     <para>
-      The latest version of this document can be checked out via CVS.
-	Please follow the instructions available at <ulink
-							   url="http://www.mozilla.org/cvs.html">the Mozilla CVS page</ulink>, and check out the <filename>mozilla/webtools/bugzilla/docs/</filename> branch.
+      The latest version of this document can always be checked out via CVS.
+	    Please follow the instructions available at 
+      <ulink url="http://www.mozilla.org/cvs.html">the Mozilla CVS page</ulink>,
+      and check out the <filename>mozilla/webtools/bugzilla/docs/</filename>
+      subtree.
+    </para>
+    <para>
+      The Bugzilla Guide is currently only available in English. 
+      If you would like to volunteer to translate it, please contact
+      <ulink url="mailto:justdave@syndicomm.com">Dave Miller</ulink>.
     </para>
   </section>
 
@@ -144,13 +119,14 @@
     <title>Credits</title>
     <para>
       The people listed below have made enormous contributions to the
-      creation of this Guide, through their dedicated hacking efforts,
+      creation of this Guide, through their writing, dedicated hacking efforts,
       numerous e-mail and IRC support sessions, and overall excellent
       contribution to the Bugzilla community:
     </para>
     <para>
       <ulink url="mailto://mbarnson@sisna.com">Matthew P. Barnson</ulink>
-      for pulling together the Bugzilla Guide and shepherding it to 2.14.
+      for the Herculaean task of pulling together the Bugzilla Guide and
+      shepherding it to 2.14.
     </para>
     <para>
       <ulink url="mailto://terry@mozilla.org">Terry Weissman</ulink>
@@ -158,13 +134,13 @@
       README upon which the UNIX installation documentation is largely based.
     </para>
     <para>
-      <ulink url="mailto://tara@tequilarista.org">Tara
-	Hernandez</ulink>  for keeping Bugzilla development going
-      strong after Terry left Mozilla.org
+      <ulink url="mailto://tara@tequilarista.org">Tara Hernandez</ulink>  
+      for keeping Bugzilla development going
+      strong after Terry left mozilla.org
     </para>
     <para>
-      <ulink url="mailto://dkl@redhat.com">Dave Lawrence</ulink> for
-      providing insight into the key differences between Red Hat's
+      <ulink url="mailto://dkl@redhat.com">Dave Lawrence</ulink> 
+      for providing insight into the key differences between Red Hat's
       customized Bugzilla, and being largely responsible for the "Red
       Hat Bugzilla" appendix
     </para>
@@ -174,8 +150,8 @@
       questions and arguments on irc.mozilla.org in #mozwebtools
     </para>
     <para>
-      Last but not least, all the members of the <ulink
-							url="news://news.mozilla.org/netscape/public/mozilla/webtools"> netscape.public.mozilla.webtools</ulink> newsgroup.  Without your discussions, insight, suggestions, and patches, this could never have happened.
+      Last but not least, all the members of the 
+      <ulink url="news://news.mozilla.org/netscape/public/mozilla/webtools"> netscape.public.mozilla.webtools</ulink> newsgroup.  Without your discussions, insight, suggestions, and patches, this could never have happened.
     </para>
     <para>
       Thanks also go to the following people for significant contributions 
@@ -183,19 +159,7 @@
     </para>
     <para>
       Zach Liption, Andrew Pearson, Spencer Smith, Eric Hanson, Kevin Brannen,
-      Ron Teitelbaum, Jacob Steenhagen, Joe Robins.
-    </para>
-  </section>
-
-  <section id="translations">
-    <title>Translations</title>
-    <para>
-      The Bugzilla Guide needs translators! Please volunteer your
-      translation into the language of your choice. If you will
-      translate this Guide, please notify the members of the
-      mozilla-webtools mailing list at
-      <email>mozilla-webtools@mozilla.org</email>, and arrange with
-      &bzg-auth; to check it into CVS.
+      Ron Teitelbaum, Jacob Steenhagen, Joe Robins, Gervase Markham.
     </para>
   </section>