More typo (and factual) fixes.

1 files changed, 62 insertions, 45 deletions

diff --git a/docs/en/xml/security.xml b/docs/en/xml/security.xml
index 4842d3ebe..8ecc388a1 100644
--- a/docs/en/xml/security.xml
+++ b/docs/en/xml/security.xml
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <!-- <!DOCTYPE chapter PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.1.2//EN"> -->
-<!-- $Id: security.xml,v 1.17 2008/04/04 06:48:24 timeless%mozdev.org Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Id: security.xml,v 1.3 2008/04/04 06:48:10 jake%bugzilla.org Exp $ -->
 
 <chapter id="security">
 <title>Bugzilla Security</title>
@@ -49,15 +49,15 @@
       <quote>SYSTEM</quote> introduces obvious security concerns, the
       problems introduced by running everything as <quote>nobody</quote> may
       not be so obvious. Basically, if you run every daemon as
-      <quote>nobody</quote> and one of them gets compromised it can
-      compromise every other daemon running as <quote>nobody</quote> on your
+      <quote>nobody</quote> and one of them gets comprimised it can
+      comprimise every other daemon running as <quote>nobody</quote> on your
       machine. For this reason, it is recommended that you create a user
       account for each daemon.
       </para>
     
       <note>
         <para>You will need to set the <option>webservergroup</option> option
-        in <filename>localconfig</filename> to the group your web server runs
+        in <filename>localconfig</filename> to the group your webserver runs
         as. This will allow <filename>./checksetup.pl</filename> to set file
         permissions on Unix systems so that nothing is world-writable.
         </para>
@@ -68,13 +68,12 @@
     <section id="security-os-chroot">
     <title>The <filename>chroot</filename> Jail</title>
     
-      <para>
-        If your system supports it, you may wish to consider running
-        Bugzilla inside of a <filename>chroot</filename> jail. This option
-        provides unprecedented security by restricting anything running
-        inside the jail from accessing any information outside of it. If you
-        wish to use this option, please consult the documentation that came
-        with your system.
+      <para>If your system supports it, you may wish to consider running
+      Bugzilla inside of a <filename>chroot</filename> jail. This option
+      provides unpresidented security by restricting anything running
+      inside the jail from accessing any information outside of it. If you
+      wish to use this option, please consult the documentation that came
+      with your system.
       </para>
       
     </section>
@@ -90,7 +89,7 @@
     <title>The MySQL System Account</title>
     
       <para>As mentioned in <xref linkend="security-os-accounts"/>, the MySQL
-      daemon should run as a non-privileged, unique user. Be sure to consult
+      daemon should run as a non-privleged, unique user. Be sure to consult
       the MySQL documentation or the documentation that came with your system
       for instructions.
       </para>
@@ -137,19 +136,19 @@
     <section id="security-mysql-network">
     <title>Network Access</title>
     
-      <para>If MySQL and your web server both run on the same machine and you
+      <para>If MySQL and your webserver both run on the same machine and you
       have no other reason to access MySQL remotely, then you should disable
       the network access. This, along with the suggestion in
       <xref linkend="security-os-ports"/>, will help protect your system from
-      any remote vulnerabilities in MySQL.
+      any remote vulnerabilites in MySQL.
       </para>
       
       <example id="security-mysql-network-ex">
       <title>Disabling Networking in MySQL</title>
       
-        <para>Simply enter the following in <filename>/etc/my.cnf</filename>:
+        <para>Simply enter the following in <filename>/etc/my.conf</filename>:
         <screen>
-[mysqld]
+[myslqd]
 # Prevent network access to MySQL.
 skip-networking
         </screen>
@@ -171,19 +170,20 @@ skip-networking
   
   
   <section id="security-webserver">
-  <title>Web server</title>
+  <title>Webserver</title>
 
     <section id="security-webserver-access">
     <title>Disabling Remote Access to Bugzilla Configuration Files</title>
     
-      <para>
-        There are many files that are placed in the Bugzilla directory
-        area that should not be accessible from the web server. Because of the way
-        Bugzilla is currently layed out, the list of what should and should not
-        be accessible is rather complicated. A quick way is to run
-        <filename>testserver.pl</filename> to check if your web server serves
-        Bugzilla files as expected. If not, you may want to follow the few
-        steps below.
+      <para>There are many files that are placed in the Bugzilla directory
+      area that should not be accessable from the web. Because of the way
+      Bugzilla is currently layed out, the list of what should and should not
+      be accessible is rather complicated. A new installation method is
+      currently in the works which should solve this by allowing files that
+      shouldn't be accessible from the web to be placed in a directory outside
+      the webroot. See 
+      <ulink url="http://bugzilla.mozilla.org/show_bug.cgi?id=44659">bug 44659</ulink>
+      for more information.
       </para>
       
       <tip>
@@ -203,6 +203,15 @@ skip-networking
               <simplelist type="inline">
                 <member><filename>*.pl</filename></member>
                 <member><filename>*localconfig*</filename></member>
+                <member><filename>runtests.sh</filename></member>
+              </simplelist>
+              </para>
+            </listitem>
+            <listitem>
+              <para>But allow:
+              <simplelist type="inline">
+                <member><filename>localconfig.js</filename></member>
+                <member><filename>localconfig.rdf</filename></member>
               </simplelist>
               </para>
             </listitem>
@@ -292,19 +301,23 @@ skip-networking
       </itemizedlist>
 
       <para>Be sure to test that data that should not be accessed remotely is
-      properly blocked. Of particular interest is the localconfig file which
+      properly blocked. Of particular intrest is the localconfig file which
       contains your database password. Also, be aware that many editors
       create temporary and backup files in the working directory and that
-      those should also not be accessible. For more information, see
+      those should also not be accessable. For more information, see 
       <ulink url="http://bugzilla.mozilla.org/show_bug.cgi?id=186383">bug 186383</ulink>
       or
       <ulink url="http://online.securityfocus.com/bid/6501">Bugtraq ID 6501</ulink>.
-      To test, simply run <filename>testserver.pl</filename>, as said above.
+      To test, simply point your web browser at the file; for example, to
+      test mozilla.org's installation, we'd try to access
+      <ulink url="http://bugzilla.mozilla.org/localconfig"/>. You should get
+      a <quote><errorcode>403</errorcode> <errorname>Forbidden</errorname></quote>
+      error.
       </para>
       
       <tip>
         <para>Be sure to check <xref linkend="http"/> for instructions
-        specific to the web server you use.
+        specific to the webserver you use.
         </para>
       </tip>
     
@@ -347,25 +360,29 @@ skip-networking
     <section id="security-bugzilla-charset">
     <title>Prevent users injecting malicious Javascript</title>
 
-      <para>If you installed Bugzilla version 2.22 or later from scratch,
-      then the <emphasis>utf8</emphasis> parameter is switched on by default.
-      This makes Bugzilla explicitly set the character encoding, following
+      <para>It is possible for a Bugzilla user to take advantage of character
+      set encoding ambiguities to inject HTML into Bugzilla comments. This
+      could include malicious scripts. 
+      Due to internationalization concerns, we are unable to
+      incorporate by default the code changes suggested by 
       <ulink
-      url="http://www.cert.org/tech_tips/malicious_code_mitigation.html#3">a
-      CERT advisory</ulink> recommending exactly this.
-      The following therefore does not apply to you; just keep
-      <emphasis>utf8</emphasis> turned on.
+      url="http://www.cert.org/tech_tips/malicious_code_mitigation.html#3">the
+      CERT advisory</ulink> on this issue.
+      If your installation is for an English speaking audience only, making the
+      change in <xref linkend="security-bugzilla-charset-ex"/> will prevent
+      this problem. 
       </para>
 
-      <para>If you've upgraded from an older version, then it may be possible
-      for a Bugzilla user to take advantage of character set encoding
-      ambiguities to inject HTML into Bugzilla comments.
-      This could include malicious scripts. 
-      This is because due to internationalization concerns, we are unable to
-      turn the <emphasis>utf8</emphasis> parameter on by default for upgraded
-      installations.
-      Turning it on manually will prevent this problem.
-      </para>
+      <example id="security-bugzilla-charset-ex">
+      <title>Forcing Bugzilla to output a charset</title>
+
+        <para>Locate the following line in
+        <filename>Bugzilla/CGI.pm</filename>:
+        <programlisting>$self->charset('');</programlisting>
+        and change it to:
+        <programlisting>$self->charset('ISO-8859-1');</programlisting>
+        </para>
+      </example>
     </section>    
     
   </section>