Massive rearrangement of the installation section. Hopefully it makes sense now.

1 files changed, 33 insertions, 10 deletions

diff --git a/docs/xml/about.xml b/docs/xml/about.xml
index 1d48fde19..b594ce163 100644
--- a/docs/xml/about.xml
+++ b/docs/xml/about.xml
@@ -6,8 +6,11 @@
 
   <section id="copyright">
     <title>Copyright Information</title>
+
+    <para>This document is copyright (c) 2000-2004 by the various
+    Bugzilla contributors who wrote it.</para>
+    
     <blockquote>
-      <attribution>Copyright (c) 2000-2004 The Bugzilla Team</attribution>
       <para>
 	Permission is granted to copy, distribute and/or modify this
 	document under the terms of the GNU Free Documentation
@@ -45,10 +48,10 @@
     </para>
     <para>
       Although the Bugzilla development team has taken great care to
-      ensure that all exploitable bugs or options have been
-      fixed, security holes surely exist. Great care should be taken both in 
+      ensure that all exploitable bugs have been fixed, security holes surely 
+      exist in any piece of code. Great care should be taken both in 
       the installation and usage of this software. The Bugzilla development
-      team members assume no liability for your use of this software. You have 
+      team members assume no liability for your use of Bugzilla. You have 
       the source code, and are responsible for auditing it yourself to ensure
       your security needs are met.
     </para>
@@ -68,16 +71,36 @@
     </para>
     <para>
       The latest version of this guide can always be found at <ulink
-      url="http://www.bugzilla.org"/>, or checked out via CVS.
-      (Please follow the <ulink url="http://www.mozilla.org/cvs.html">Mozilla 
+      url="http://www.bugzilla.org"/>, or checked out via CVS by
+      following the <ulink url="http://www.mozilla.org/cvs.html">Mozilla 
       CVS</ulink> instructions and check out the 
       <filename>mozilla/webtools/bugzilla/docs/</filename>
-      subtree.) However, you should read the version
+      subtree. However, you should read the version
       which came with the Bugzilla release you are using.
     </para>
     <para>
-      The Bugzilla Guide is currently only available in English. 
-      If you would like to volunteer to translate it, please contact
+      The Bugzilla Guide, or a section of it, is also available in
+      the following languages:
+      <ulink url="http://bugzilla-de.sourceforge.net/docs/html/">German</ulink>.
+    </para>
+    
+    <para>  
+      In addition, there are Bugzilla template localisation projects in
+      the following languages. They may have translated documentation 
+      available: 
+      <ulink url="http://sourceforge.net/projects/bugzilla-be/">Belarusian</ulink>,
+      <ulink url="http://sourceforge.net/projects/bugzilla-br/">Brazilian Portuguese</ulink>,
+      <ulink url="http://sourceforge.net/projects/bugzilla-cn/">Chinese</ulink>,
+      <ulink url="http://sourceforge.net/projects/bugzilla-fr/">French</ulink>,
+      <ulink url="http://sourceforge.net/projects/bugzilla-de/">German</ulink>,
+      <ulink url="http://sourceforge.net/projects/bugzilla-kr/">Korean</ulink>,
+      <ulink url="http://sourceforge.net/projects/bugzilla-ru/">Russian</ulink> and
+      <ulink url="http://sourceforge.net/projects/bugzilla-es/">Spanish</ulink>.
+    </para>
+    
+    <para>  
+      If you would like to volunteer to translate the Guide into additional
+      languages, please contact
       <ulink url="mailto:justdave@syndicomm.com">Dave Miller</ulink>.
     </para>
   </section>
@@ -113,7 +136,7 @@
     </para>
     
     <para>
-      Last but not least, all the members of the 
+      Also, thanks are due to the members of the 
       <ulink url="news://news.mozilla.org/netscape.public.mozilla.webtools">
       netscape.public.mozilla.webtools</ulink>
       newsgroup. Without your discussions, insight, suggestions, and patches,