Fix for bug 227213: Chomping murder in token emails and pages. Fix

chomping issues, a spurious   in an email template, and minor
rewordings to make the text prettier -- oh, I realize this isn't Chaucer
yet, but who knows? r=jouni, a=justdave.

1 files changed, 5 insertions, 5 deletions

diff --git a/template/en/default/account/password/forgotten-password.txt.tmpl b/template/en/default/account/password/forgotten-password.txt.tmpl
index c6b04b35a..b5e156231 100644
--- a/template/en/default/account/password/forgotten-password.txt.tmpl
+++ b/template/en/default/account/password/forgotten-password.txt.tmpl
@@ -26,8 +26,8 @@ From: bugzilla-admin-daemon
 To: [% emailaddress %]
 Subject:  [% terms.Bugzilla %] Change Password Request
 
-You (or someone impersonating you) has requested to change your [% terms.Bugzilla %]
- password.  To change your password, visit the following link:
+You have (or someone impersonating you has) requested to change your 
+[%+ terms.Bugzilla %] password. To complete the change, visit the following link:
 
 [%+ Param('urlbase') %]token.cgi?a=cfmpw&t=[% token FILTER url_quote %]
 
@@ -36,6 +36,6 @@ this request, visit the following link:
 
 [%+ Param('urlbase') %]token.cgi?a=cxlpw&t=[% token FILTER url_quote %]
 
-If you do nothing, the request will lapse after
-[%- max_token_age %] days
-([% time2str("%H:%M on the %o of %B, %Y", expiration_ts) -%]) or when you log in successfully.
+If you do nothing, the request will lapse after [%+ max_token_age +%] days (at 
+precisely [%+ time2str("%H:%M on the %o of %B, %Y", expiration_ts) -%]) or when you 
+log in successfully.